Pretty Crazy

I like it. It's complex and interesting. But really, is someone going to commit suicide just because her grades are failing and she thinks she's too perfect? I don't know, ...

Bats, awesome! I love stories about bats. :) This is kind of like a cross between Warriors and Silverwing . One little thing, not much action besides the hawk scene. ...

Hello, DragonWriter. :) Welcome to YWS! It is my pleasure to give your first review. When I saw the title I HAD to read this! I love dragons too. There ...

Hey there. :) I really like your story, your writing flows very well. The plot is good, but maybe add a few twists to it or something? Just to make ...

That was the first second-person POV I've ever read. Even so, I think you did a good job on it. Wow, and it's in future tense. Kudos to you! Let's ...

Hello, I like this story. I agree with the others that this is well written from a child's point of view. And the end is especially powerful. It's so sad ...

Oh wow, this is really cool! I agree with Celdover, I love your narrator! The mood throughout this entire chapter is amazing, energetic, and enthusiastic. I really want to read ...

Alright, here I am as promised. Hmm, let's see. Still liking this story- a lot. But there's one thing. It seems a little forced or something. Like you keep saying ...

Hello, I'm really enjoying this story, and I see you have chapter 3 up so that's where I'll be going next! But first, if you don't mind, there are a ...

I really don't have a critique. But just thought I'd say that this is really good! It almost feels like I could have wrote it. That's how much I agree ...

I enjoyed this a lot. It's very well written and brilliantly done from Lance's perspective. And you kept it real. Everyday characteristics in this story has made it believable and ...

I like the idea too. It looks like this has potential, have you written anymore? I'd love to see what happens next. But it seems really rushed. Writing something is ...

Hey, it's been a long time since I've done a review. But I'll try. :) Not only was that a good peice of literature, I think we can all learn ...

I agree with everyone that you've improved. Not much to say that hasn't been said, but there is one thing. Don't stop. You can go far because you have natural ...

Ooh that was intense. I haven't done a review in a long time so let's hope this goes well. A of now, I couldn’t care any less. Isn't it "As"? ...